My Best Friend Poem by sakalabaktula sairaj

My Best Friend



It was a very sunny day
I meet saw u for the first time on that Sunday.

I was not dared to talk to you for the first time.
But wanted to be silent in front of all for that time.

I felt very uneasy and shy to talk with you.
But I felt happy by seeing you wanted to talk with you.

I just dared to get your number from our MEG group to chat.
But in between I felt confused about which was ur number and it became so late.

Later i got your number to chat with you in what s app.
But don't know how to go ahead and start up.

But at last I chatted with you because you were so sweet.
But while chatting with you I felt happy but you was mute.

Later I approached you be my friend but you ignored my request.
But I am keeping my request and trying to impress you my level best.

I think i had any mistake while talking to you
That ur not accepting my friend request yet waiting for you.

I believe that i am good right.
But I failed to impress you I think I was so good so I quit

You are so sweet my dear Bhabani Hial.
I really like your behavior and your nice smile and talking style.

So please accept my request and be friend with me, if you can.
I will be so happy and i may be your best friend, give me chance I think I can.

I think It would be boring and may be waste.
I am not so talented like you and ur the best.


Do not forget to comment and send me the correction if any if possible

Thanking you

Sairaj S

Saturday, September 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

In case of a boy to make friendship with a spinster isn't easy. The first meeting and first talkings bring shyness and hesitation. Dear Sakalabaktula you have so nicely and touchingly inscribed this situation in this poem. Let me quote some of the lines..... I was not dared to talk to you for the first time. But wanted to be silent in front of all for that time. I felt very uneasy and shy to talk with you. But I felt happy by seeing you wanted to talk with you. I just dared to get your number from our MEG group to chat. But in between I felt confused about which was ur number and it became so late. Beautiful poem on love and friendship with nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 30 September 2017

The poem is quite insightful and reflects your longing for someone you love so intensely. Your quest will not go in vain because it is humbly honest. Thanks, s sairaj.

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