My Armor Poem by Sam Fitts

My Armor



I have a suit of armor,
Forged from cold emotion.
I have a suit of armor,
It protects me from the world.

She destroyed my armor,
Filled my heart with warmth.
She destroyed my armor,
Leaving me naked to the world.

She stabbed me with betrayal,
Filling my heart with ice.
She stabbed me with betrayal,
And left me there to cry.

I had a suit of armor,
To protect me from the world.
I had a suit of armor,
It estranged me from the world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
immortal Butterfly 03 May 2009

Different than the first five I read. I love this one as much as the others. ~Autumn~

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Ashleigh Michaud 30 April 2009

awwh that was darling! ! weird to darling, random transtition, but it works! ! !

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Melissa Black 30 April 2009

That was very beautiful.

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Alyssa Long 28 April 2009

vedy nice, vedy nice! high 5!

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Debra Kemper 28 April 2009

Well said. Nice imagery.

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