Mother- Iii Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Mother- Iii

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Shakes up when a Richter scale,
Seismographs when fail,
Only her ship sails smooth sail!

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Haiku | 08.05.15 |

Thursday, April 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2019

A lovely haiku on mother is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul the poem is slightly revised in case you like to have a look.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

While I thank you for visiting this Haiku, you may have a look at the revised one.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2019

The love of a mother could never be.shaken come or high water. A wonderdul haiku that captures the great love of a mother.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, the poem is now revised a bit.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, you might like to have a glance at the revised version.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2019

Her ship sails smooth sail! Mother! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

Thank you Edward Louis, you might like to read the revised version.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2019

Thank you Edward Louis, you might like to read this poem now, after it is slightly revised.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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