More Moons Poem by Sanjukta Nag

More Moons

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When the soothing light of your eyes
Exchange glances with the sun
On the colossal blue,
Colours start swimming around me
Like dazzling butterflies.
And my silly heart
Bewitched by your majestic charm,
Still revolves around you like a mere satellite,
Inspite of visualizing that
You have more moons than Jupiter!

Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 29 September 2015

Wonderful poetry. Love is in full flow. Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 28 September 2015

Some people are gravity wells. Having many orbit them

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2015

Very creative poem. He is so lucky to have a beloved like you.......beyond rating.

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