Moonlight Poem by Rani Turton

Moonlight

Rating: 5.0


There is a stillness in the night that, softly
Unfreezes the most frozen of hearts;
There is a glow about moonlight
Which can touch your face
And set it a-glow: like candlelight it lights
And highlights even the most humble place.

There is the sun in everyone
But the moon, like a loom
Works on the finest of stuff
In a silent shuttered room.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 March 2008

Great atmosphere in this one. Your last stanza is simply superb. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 March 2008

There is some good philosophy in your poems.Yeah last stanza is impressive my 10

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Broken Peaces 16 March 2008

A truely creative piece of work, the ambience of your moon has definetely touched this heart thankyou Rani 10 x

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

your poems are good and reflective..... Unfreezes the most frozen of hearts; metaphorically well said....

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 25 March 2008

Your writing is incredible...so descriptive, a joy to read.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

A nice poem. Last stanza is marvelous. 10+

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Bandit Madison 01 July 2008

A wonderful poem... The moon does seem to do its finest work when one is alone to meditate. -BM

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Duncan Wyllie 12 June 2008

This has got such a beautiful feel to it like finely woven thread Love duncan X

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~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

A poem of scrumptious loveliness, beautifully composed. Thanks for sharing best wishes Jon

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Lynda Robson 06 May 2008

This is a lovley piece of writing Rani, it is almost surreal in its quality, a perfect description of moonlight, thanks, Lynda xxx

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