Moments Poem by Rain Storm

Moments

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Theres a gentle song to your stressful day,
When the sultriness of rolling wind can't be turned away.
What a captivating moment
And it sees me through,
Its enough for this girl just to want to be with you.

And do you see this moment,
It is vivid and clear,
Its enough for me that you're right here.
Its enough to make this girl believe in the very best
So long as it keeps my heart beating in my chest.

Theres one moment for every,
If only they knew,
That the revolving compass moves us all in cue.
Theres a rhyme, a reason, for the mysterious outdoors,
When the heart of mine beats in time with yours.

*For the best year hands down*

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 03 April 2008

Expressive poem of love. Keep it up Rain Storm.

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***** ********* 18 May 2006

Third stanza 'one' missing at the end of first line. Tidy up the punctuation and you have a sweet poem of loving, just don't expect too much. It is a bad idea. Believe me! Tai

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