Modern Schooling Poem by Xelam Kan™

A good poem, I liked it.

An absolute verbal beauty of verse that speaks high of the rich diction and dexterity of the poet. The poem is a pleasant and obviously rare deviation from your usual writes. Once Bri Edwards has commented so comprehensively I think there is no need for a comment from my side.

now john, how am i to believe that the same john who writes sometimes like a 'foreigner is the same john who wrote this probably-stunning poem? ? ? ? ? i say probably as i am no expert concerning stunning poems, except MINE, of course. and 'this' refers to Modern schooling? i suppose; what else would it be talking about! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'd like to be inside your mind long enough to know why you used envy in the following portion of the poem: its glare robs sight and insight too, and yields nothing but yawning and envy. ................it SOUNDS pretty intelligent, john. ;) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Frankenstein's illusion- who dint know: how to spend or live this life? ........ ............. this is VERY NICE! one of my favorite movie characters....the illusion that is. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - And bethink! we are born ignorant not stupid but 'this' turns us the latter. ah! who cares... now i wonder if you DO care, or NOT. i think you do. i don't know if i do. it is time for supper now anyway. could any poem be more important than my meal? ? ? prosody? okay i guess. i liked it enough to send to MyPoemList, sir. :) bri thanks for sharing.