Modern Savior Poem by Ananda Alves

Modern Savior

Rating: ★4.9


Patched lips
Locked fears
Delusional breath

Swallowed tears
Refrained pain
Unspoken lines

Eyes cold as ice
Fighting for air
Searching for light

He's so unsteady
As quite as fragile

Punched the walls
Fists are clenched
Wrists are sore

It's self destruction
For some's redemption
And others' salvation

Would you like him to save you?
Tell us, would you let him save you now?

Ananda Alves
Sunday, May 6, 2007
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Mary Das 08 May 2007

This one is something very different.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 May 2007

Salvation comes to those who save them selves... Ananda

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Who's Erwhatsit 07 May 2007

I think, most of the time, we all need saving!

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David Harris 06 May 2007

Ananda, this is a powerful write about a person who needs saving from his own self destruction. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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