Mobile Love Poem by Samanwaya Njaaneya

Mobile Love

Rating: 5.0


(ha..hihhi...the feeling of one girl when her dearone is not picking the phone)

The 'reason' of my dreamz! ! ....
from when u became 'out of range'....
-and 'not reachable' from me..
you are that much 'busy'...
-to ignore my hurted words........
Im still in 'call-waiting'...
-for your replay...



(malayalam version)


Kathirupp....


ente swapnangalude utharavaadi...
ennumuthalaanen paridhikku purathaayathu nee...?
enikku reachablallathathra akalayanooo nee...?
ente ee murivetta vaakkukelkaathathra busyaanoo nee...
marupadikkay callwaithingil naanippozhum....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 28 August 2009

cutely composed using communication terms, to communicate to that lost connection.........................like the idea.................10

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Vinod Ak 20 May 2009

ugran poem! adi poli! :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Cutely composed,10++

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premji premji 15 May 2009

one of my friends wrote a small poem achannoru e-mail ammakkoru e-mail.. njaano verumoru female!

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Rakesh Radhakrishnan 16 July 2008

Hi Sumayya, Kathirippu enna eeee kavitha valare manoharamayirikkunnu. eniyum Malayalam Kavithakal pratheekshikkunnu

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