Mixed Poem by Mahbubar Rahman Qadery

Mixed

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Forecast of defeat is hidden
Amidst the parade of victory.
Pure is not even our pleasure-
And courage is stained with fear.

Sunday, September 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: realisation,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 September 2016

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in profound poetic diction with conviction. '..in every victorious person there is a defeated person, and in every defeated person there is a victorious person...' I concur with the conviction of the poem. Thanks for sharing Mahbubar.

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Mahbubar Rahman Qadery 07 September 2016

Thanks a lot.

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2016

An insightful piece, Mahbubar. Thanks

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Mahbubar Rahman Qadery 06 September 2016

Thank you, Kelly!

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Gajanan Mishra 04 September 2016

pure is not even our pleasure, very fine

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Mahbubar Rahman Qadery 06 September 2016

Thanks for your comment!

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