Missing You Poem by Madz Vash

Missing You

Rating: 5.0


When I was cleaning my files i saw the first poem that i wrote (except the ones at school, i mean this was the first time that i really intended to write what i feel) . I'm trying to find the others which is not like a broken love poem or something. I'm trying to vary my poems so i can improve my writing. anyway here it is. -Thanks :)



The stars are shining brightly

Then you said you love me

Days after I found out

It wasn't me

But It's okay

As long as your happy

I'm willing to suffer

I'm right here, smiling

But deep inside I'm dying

Can't stop crying

And I'm hurting

For I'm Missing you

Things are not

The same anymore

For what we have before

Are now gone and never coming back

Those days when you

Made a song for me

Those times when you

Lent your shoulders so I can sleep

I can't believe those days were gone

It hurts to think

That I will not be the one anymore

Who you'll sing a song

I'm hurting

Coz you're the only one

Who made me feel this way

And I'm missing you

more and more each day

The feeling continues

To grow everyday

I really love you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 September 2009

We as humans, go through different stages in our lives, learning sometimes the hard and painful ways that not all dreams come true...We fall and get up again, but we keep on going...Please, read my poem titled 'MISS, MISSING YOU', and you will see what I went through, Love and Peace, Romeo, you truly got my 10+ vote for your honesty...

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 September 2009

Sad but a very wonderful poem Expressed directly from heart expressed the will to move on.. heartfelt acceptance of reality Love is like that..... we have to try to be hurt to feel we are human... to lose to know that we really know how to love.. thanks for sharing 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

My friend, I can identify with this poem, I have learned the hard and painful ways, to start missing what is coming my way, not what is already gone. It got to the point in my life that I almost got drowned in my own tears...However, I survived! so you...read my poem, please, titled: 'Miss missing you', Love and Peace, Romeo

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