Missing Piece Of Me.. Poem by Dolly Poserio

Missing Piece Of Me..

Rating: 5.0


I really don't know if what i feel is real
There is something in me that wants to reveal
I hope and believe that it is you in thee
Whom I wanted to see in the future with me

No matter how hard I tried to forget and leave the past
Memories always coming back, stayed and never last
I deleted your mail and emptied your folder
But can't command thy heart even you said 'forever' no reaching out

To love is to hold and behold what is mine
Share the happiness that brings everyone in kind
Fate and destiny will definitely find its way
For happiness is to take and not to slip away

I love you is all I ever knew
Feelings that can't hide and makes me feel in blue
I hate you for I don't know what to do
My heart says that the missing piece of me is you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 25 September 2009

Nice theme, nice imagery, good poem...however some wrds can be cut to make it lean and more appealing....

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Dolly Poserio 25 September 2009

thanks! i think im in love.. lol!

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Mubeen Sadhika 25 September 2009

Heartfelt expression. Neatly flowing. Nice narration. Deserves 10++++

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