Miss You Loads Poem by lil island Gal

Miss You Loads

Rating: 5.0


Life stands still
When you’re not here.
How I wish time would speed up
Iike in old movies
Pages flying off the calendar,
Hands tearing around the clock faces,
Making it time to see you again.
Till then, I survive on little trace of you
Your scent on my photos,
Your breath warm and close
In my dreams.
I pass the time
Tracing your name with my finger
And thinking up
Just the right things to say
To make you laugh.
I look up at the stars
And picture you looking up
At the same sky too.


It’s feeling like no other,
This bittersweet longing
For everything about you
And when we’re finally together.
I wont miss another chance
To be close as a heartbeat
To you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 13 October 2008

haha very nice sana.....when you miss someone it makes you write these lines...well done

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Sadiqullah Khan 28 January 2009

To be close as a heart beat speaks it all. May the love god help us all.10

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Jitz ***** 13 December 2008

you indeed conjured a beautiful image in my mind.... the longing to be with our loved ones.

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

what an image that u have drawn.i feel like living the situation.i sm touched.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 November 2008

Have you got the feelings so far? ? I bet its a wonderful experience a human can get! ! ! nice piece indeed.If I could share this with you. shall I? ? ?

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 October 2008

fine feeling of missing! the poem emitting love......10+

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