****i Need You**** Poem by lil island Gal

****i Need You****

Rating: 2.7


if one day you feel like crying...
call me
i dont promise that
i will make you laugh,
but i can cry with you.

if one day you want to run away...
dont be afraid
to call me
i dont promise to
ask you to stop
but i can run with you.

if one day you
dont want to listen...
to anyone..
call me
i promise to be there
for you
and i promise
to be very quiet,

But if one day
you call
and there is
no answer
come fast to see me...! ! ! !

perhaps i need u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 April 2009

A very emotional poem...................full of wise words.....................the poem dripping with love, wisdom, affection, care, and need to surreder to beloved...............can come from ur pen only......................good write.................

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Eyan Desir 16 April 2009

Aww, I liked your poem I Liked your flow Thanks you everything Sorry, I cant help you I wish I could Thank you for the poems You shared With Us Eyan

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Nangula Immanuel 18 April 2009

WOW! i love this poem! ! i know what you mean, i can relate. Sometimes you are always the one helping that people forget that you need help too. i felt like that when i wrote ' friendless friend'. perhaps you can read it. would be nice. N.N.

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Barry A. Lanier 18 April 2009

The passion of being compassionate and empathy jumps from the pages of this wonderful penning...reminding me of what agappe love is really all about...the poetess pen exposing her character.....Bravo

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everyone can count on you marry....especially to write a great poem like this! ! :) you're just awesome that way... thanks, i love this poem +10

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Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

You will be missed a lot blessings....

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Come fast to see me' Rachel Ann Butler

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

thoughtful and lovely expressions! .......10+

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Surayya Abbas 30 May 2009

What a lovely poem. I read it many times.Thanks for sharing.

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Akram Saqib 30 April 2009

good call for a beloved friend thanks for sharing

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