Miss U Poem by saira sms

Miss U



u were everything to me
u cared
u loved
u touched
u showed me how to be happy
u showed me how to eat healthy
u showed me i was beautiful
u made me feel like i could touch the sky
u made me the luckiest girl in the world
u made me learn all the wonderful parts of growing up
u inspired me to be great
u inspired me that life can be alot better then it is
u inspired me to work hard to get away from this life
u were always there
u were always willing to listen
u were always there for a hug
or a cuddle
or a touch
or a dream
but u picked her
u loved me and picker her
why
thats all i have to ask
why
u say u just want to be friends
i'm ok with that
but then why do u say u miss me
cause it only makes me realize
i miss u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzada Imtiaz Ali 22 August 2009

the concepts and expressions in the poems are shown your interest in yourself? imtiaz

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Saira Sms 19 January 2008

lol i was surprised when everone said they loved my condence of words thats just how i write online so i guess it came out in my wrtieing but thanks for the love anyways

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I always think of Miss Ewe, but once I got past that, you had a lovely cadence to your words.

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