Mirror Poem by Black Rose

Mirror



Who's that in the mirror
It odesn't look like me
I don't know who that is
i don't like what I see

It hurts me just to see her
Her eyes are filled with pain
Burning holes into my soul
I don't know her name

We stare at each other
She moves, so do I
Our eyes begin to fill with tears
We both begin to cry

I don't know who she is
But I see who she used to be
A normal, happy, lively kid
Oh wait, that girl is me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 05 July 2009

this was really good, i wish there was more depth into it but it was really good as a summary

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Heather Hill 05 July 2009

i really did like that one if only u added a lil more to it...this poem reminds me so much of me...so i can totally relate to this one good job hope u will continue to write more..

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