Memento* (Part I) Poem by Neil Young

Memento* (Part I)



Thunder!
Purring like a thirty-two;
Storm-clouds,
Sagging, humourless and bleak;
Soldiers’
Spirits on the verge must break.
Beaten,
We crawl bellied over land.
Trenches,
Sanctuary, stretching miles.
Flashes
Strike for death beyond our heads,
Pumping
Ricochets in bleeding earth.
Faces
Of our friends, illuminated;
Others
That we know, eliminated.
We wait,
Each count lightening the load.
We wait,
Mumbling our unfinished prayers,
Within
The numbed silence of our minds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laila lili 07 January 2009

i dont know what to say? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? simply it is alovely and great with my love Laila Lili

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Mifael Llauderes 16 November 2008

fierce..! draws a full length action in a limited verse.

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