Melodious Bagatelle Poem by Sandra Feldman

Melodious Bagatelle

Rating: 4.9


So sweet, the music
Of some poem is,
No normal soul,
Its melodies
Can easily resist
And flowing,
Dancing,
With its words
Sometimes,
We even can
So slightly,
Feel
A little tremor
That momentarily,
The loneliness
From hearts,
Makes disappear.

Saturday, November 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme,simple
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 November 2020

A well thought poem..... Truly sublime and splendid......5 stars*****

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2020

Sometimes, We even can So slightly, Feel A little tremor That momentarily, The loneliness From hearts, Makes disappear......an impressive expression. Beautifully inscribed poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 28 November 2020

So true and so beautifully expressed. Words have power! Congratulations for the well deserved member poem place.

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Kim Barney 28 November 2020

A simple rhyme is best every time. You've done it again. Congrats, my friend!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 November 2020

All poetry is music. And it's so excellently expressed in this elegant poem. Very happy for it being POD. Congratulations, Sandra!

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Sandra Feldman 28 November 2020

Thank you, All Distinguished friends and poets, for such beautiful words and comments dedicated to this Bagatelle of a poem. Which you lifted up so much, as well as you did my spirits with words of affection and beauty, that I shall not forget! I celebrate you, poets and poetry, may you all be, always, the example of how good life can really get. Thank you, for your unforgettable kindness and consideration, Sandra Feldman

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Lee Boueri 28 November 2020

Beautifully penned. I like it more with every read.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2020

ts melodies Can easily resist, And flouting Dancing, With its words Sometimes, We even can So slightly, Feel A little tremor../// beautiful rhythmic music can thrill the inside heart by its melodious harmony and the words which naturally come as poetic genre; beautiful poem penned; it's short but beautifully penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....from me 5*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2020

A true Poet can always feel the heart and soul of a Poem, the beatings of its heart and the rhythm of the song that it delivers. A very touching and lovely poem so beautifully written. A wonderful offering of a great and dedicated Poetess whose Poetry is incomparable. To my Poem List.

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Varsha M 28 November 2020

Yes music has that power to carry away all pain and agony and make us feel free and relaxed. Congratulations for being chosen as PPD.

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