Me The River-First Steps Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

Me The River-First Steps

Rating: 5.0


I was born in a rocky hill
Rather a cave, low lights.
When I was in the womb
I heard my mother singing
Lullabies, passionate, loving.


I heard her, talking me again
And again not to kick her
Be soft my dear, be soft.


I listened to her dreams
Her expectations, complaints
Her passions, love, everything.
Her heartbeat was the rhythm
Opened my eyes to the world.

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I was so helpless within,
Cant move without her help
I sucked her, the blissful nectar
Gave me, life and growth forever.


Jiggling, smiling swaying, falling
Stumbling, sitting, finally standing.
I made my way to my little steps
Mother earth was always perfect
Together with father nature, caring
Me beyond all the expectations.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
prasanna 18 November 2020

The personification of the river and self Is superb

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Marvellous poem with beautiful imageries. The birth of stream has so emotionally been described. deserves more than the top marks

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Susan Williams 03 September 2020

When I was in the womb I heard my mother singing Lullabies, passionate, loving.- - - -what a beautiful image to have of your Mother before you were even born! ! ! ! My daughter recognized my heart beat from when she was in the womb! ! !

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