Me Bent, She Unrepentant Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Me Bent, She Unrepentant

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Bent knees, how we climb up a steep hill,
Bent knees we make amends, ditched by Jill.
Joe when tried this ruse old
Found her still rather cold,
Oh why this remedy
Fetches no fruits ready?
Oft used, defused has gotten the pill.
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Many a harassed husband might have climbed this conjugal hill trying to please, especially after a tiff with his love interest or spouse, and often cold shouldered like this Joe.
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Humour | 08.12.14 |

Saturday, August 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2019

An amazing romantic Limerick sir! Thoroughly enjoyed......................................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2019

Yes, that is what it is, a laughing pill, no prescription. Thanks Dr Swain.

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Perfect description of marital displeasure. Thank you dear poet for your comments.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2019

Perfect description, may be, but as a prescription, as remedy pill it has failed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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