Maremma, Distant Memories - Iii. Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

Maremma, Distant Memories - Iii.

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I remember you, standing before me,
Lined up on the steps of the school,
Offering my insatiable young sight
The seductive vision of your harmonic figure;
And the absorbed swaying of your brown braid
Was the snake that mesmerized my senses.

It was not me to pull it, as you understood at once,
But when you turned around, with barely a
Frown of disapproval
The charm of your eyes hit me
As the announcement of land over the horizon
A castaway.

And since then
That memory has warmed my soul.

Maremma, Distant Memories  -  Iii.
Sunday, September 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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This is the English translation of a poem I wrote some years ago (2010) .

The Italian title is 'Lontani ricordi di Maremma, III.'
You can read also the original text on poem hunter.

It's a memory dated almost 50 years.. as I was barely 13 y.o. that time.. :)

'Maremma' is a region south of Tuscany, I've lived there for a number of years when I was a kid..

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Note:

''And the absorbed swaying of your brown braid''

meaning.. her long braid was swaying slowly, when she gently moved her head.. just a faint moving, like 'it' were 'engrossed in deep thoughts'...
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 23 September 2015

An enchanting little gen sir.. I love how your poems often show a glimplse of an old memory and the warmth in them.. Beautiful..

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 September 2015

point is.. 'memories' help me to survive.. thank you for your kind comment, Souren

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Sandra Feldman 13 September 2015

Very nice! Quite a romantic at thirteen. The poem is amazing for such a young age. Well, genius has no age.

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Sandra Feldman 13 September 2015

I still think you're a genius

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Fabrizio Frosini 13 September 2015

well, it's that memory that is dated 50 years.. the poem only 5... :) thank you, Sandra!

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David Wood 13 September 2015

Such delightful memories you have depicted in this lovely poem.

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Fabrizio Frosini 13 September 2015

thank you, David.. I've appreciated your coming by and commenting on my poems

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