Maiden Name Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Maiden Name

Rating: 5.0


Her name is Girl before she becomes a woman
And she already became a maidservant with her precious children.
The partner goes out, fulfill their desires
And nobody calls again by her previous name.
Her life seems to be a *maiden over with all the hardships.

*[ An over in cricket with no runs scored]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 06 January 2008

A delicious use of the cricketing term. Wit twinkles from your words. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 29 December 2007

Something a bit poignant about this one. An interesting play on words. Fine work, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2007

A witty little epigram. Clever penning Nimal. love, Allie xxxx

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