Loyalty Removed Poem by Kirrin Holzapfel

Loyalty Removed

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I need not a loyal heart,
who treats my words as law.
I need a true heart
without malice;
backed by a mind
which can act on it's own.
Challenge me,
as well as love me.
For that, I can use.
And in turn,
be of use to you.

Tuesday, July 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: unity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My distaste of inequality in relationships. Whether friendships or love. I dont look forbpeople who blindly follow but for partners of all sorts that can help me grow.
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