Loving Breeze Poem by David Darbyshire

Loving Breeze

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When a breeze blows through
It brings fresh hope for me and you
because every breeze is a thought
from one who loves you true

So on a windy day, there is
a lot of thinking going on
It could be the loved one is worried
or there is something going wrong

When the day is tranquil
and all your troubles are gone
your loved one is at peace,
a breeze will come along

So every time you
feel a breeze.
Go and give the one you Love,
a loving Squeeze

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love the analogy/logic here. If breeze equals thought, therefore wind equals lots of thinking, in tranquil weather expect a breeze and act to pre-empt the consequence of storm perhaps..... Really well thought-out and put together David. I'm going to remember this one - and do lots of squeezing :) .

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Patricia Gale 29 June 2006

Wonderful, loving thoughts. One of your best! Hugs Patricia

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Ernestine Northover 26 June 2006

A nice breezy poem which lifts up ones spirits. Nicely produced. love Ernestine XXX

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Dee Daffodil 26 June 2006

What lovely warm toughts in this poem. Very creative Dave...I really like this one...it's going in my favorites! Hugs, Dee

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Nalini Hebbar 26 June 2006

really nice dave...never thought of it that way...loved it...nalini

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Francesca Johnson 26 June 2006

Such a sweet poem, Dave. 'Every breeze is a thought.' I will remember that when I go out on a windy day. Very nice poem. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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