Love Vs. Love Poem by Brooke Peterson

Love Vs. Love

Rating: 5.0


Your love, a candle, a flame-
...slow burning, steady.
Your love, a match, fire the same-
...ever quick, ever ready.

Your love, like a bonfire-
...took time to build.
Your love, like a wildfire-
...took over, unwilled.

Your love is true-
...tested, strong, and steady.
Your love is new-
...easy, natural, and ready.

But Love, is Love.
So to choose fire or flame?
..Like the stars up above-
...All burn, quite the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stella Andrews 25 October 2009

o gosh that seems like it would have been a hard thing to write, but its so very good! lol x stella

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Sanober Khan 20 October 2009

that is a beautiful and tender piece of writing, a pure expression of love! i liked it very much!

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Christine Schmidt 04 September 2009

I especially like the 2nd stanza! Nice write!

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