Love Unhidden Poem by naveen kumar

Love Unhidden

Rating: 2.8


Sitting on my chair
thinking what dare you'll dare
to entice me through your
killing eyes,
with chemistry of love flourishing
noone can hide
reaally shows on your temples, your faces
emotions none can belie

trying avoid u,
but sometimes i think
how can i do

With your startling eyes
you stared
sleeping tonight seems to be a dare

like a dropp of water
you came to a desert me
with thorny life lonely

I won't let you go
even my life i have to forgo.


its my first poem of my life
looking for your comments!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 11 October 2008

To hold and hide love is like stopping our heart to beat.True Love comes just once.Very sweet and passionate poem..expressing love in most truest way...10 for this Naveen..

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Sumita Datta 02 June 2007

You never no, in chemistry of love when what happens... good that you stared writing poems... carry on... :)

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