Love - My Only One - Sweet! Poem by XXXHolix Fire

Love - My Only One - Sweet!



I'm writing this only for you
No one else but you
It shows my love for you
That willl never change as we get older

The only fact that's true and pure is that my love for you is greater than anyone else
I never felt this way to anybody before
Just feeling this immense love for you
Is the reason why I live

No matter how bitter my tears are
Your small comfort blocks out the feeling of emptiness
Your small comfort can defeat anything in this world
And I'm glad that you're mine

I'm glad that I'm yours and you're mine
Even though you're just a human
You're different
To me, you're perfect in every way
Your flaws are uniquely charming and graceful
That I fell in love with it as I love you

I feel this joy
That boils inside me
As I say your name
As I hear your voice
As I see you smile
And as you're next to me

Because of you, I can be happy everyday
Because of you, I don't live without any regrets
Because of you, I smile everyday
Because of you, I love you
Because of you, I live

I giggle when you talk about me
I giggle when I just look at the present I gave you
I giggle when I feel you next to me
I giggle when you whisper to me that you love me

It hurts me when I can't see you in every second
It hurts me when you don't say my name
It hurts me when you don't smile
It hurts me when you forget to hug me

I want to thank you for everything you've done for me
I wish I had more than a lifetime to pay you back
I wish I had eternal time to pay you back
Of all the joy and love you only gave to me
Nobody ever filled me with happiness as you did

I'm only writing this to you
Because there's no one else I can write this to
Since my love for you will never change
And I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 14 June 2008

I felt every word of this and I was able to do so because there were no distractions in what the writer had to say. There were no poetic tricks foisted on the reader. Its really a prose piece and for a poem, it may be too long. But the purpose of this writing was not to suit a critic. It was to say I love you. And as everyone knows; when you're in love, you want to say it every way you can. GW62

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