Love, My Love Poem by Tobi Awodunmila

Love, My Love

Rating: 4.3


The Day Look So Bright
The Weather So Right
My Love So True
And Yet So Blue
My love is So Pure
Even Though I Am Poor

I Wonder And Ponder
If Truly You Are A Mortal
Of Your Kind None Can I Find
You A So Cool And Yet So Good
If You could, Then You Should
Be Good And Not Be Rude

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Louise Kerswell 08 August 2007

I like how your poem rymes. I guess sometimes true love is hard to find

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Amy Louise Kerswell 08 August 2007

I like how your poem rymes. I guess sometimes true love is hard to find

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** ** 07 August 2007

nothing 2 say more than well done, keep writting, urs frinds khadija

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Micheal Udenyi 27 July 2007

great.excellent rhymes and rethym. more grace to your able

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