Love Me Without Pity Poem by Von Klassique

Love Me Without Pity

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We 've been together,
Thinking it would last forever.
One little fight, we scatter.
But, couldn't live without her-
So, I begged to come back.

It wasn't Obvious-
She was fed up.
She took me not for a lover
but a brother without a Lover;
She felt Pity
and took me back.

But now, it's Obvious-
it's Pity and not Love.
Thus, this Love is Nothing!
And for Pity's sake;
making things easy-
lets part ways.
For I wish not Pity
but Love always.

Love Me if You Love Me;
Dont Love Me out of Pity!

Sunday, February 19, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 February 2012

Without love, no one feel pity, so it is love disguised. Do not miss the chance. Nice poem..

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Michael Hopkins 13 August 2022

Where there is pity, there can be no love or at least a weal flow. Well penned, emotional poem

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

wonderful deep amd insightful.......great feelings powerful expresssions....................lovely :)

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Apeksha Kumar 13 March 2012

waaoo.. i could really feel the words.. huh.. awsome! :)

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Ramesh Rai 20 February 2012

love with pity has no relevance

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Rose Jones 19 February 2012

wow. Good poem. how old are you? you write well.

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Von Klassique

Von Klassique

Benin city, Edo State, Nigeria.
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