Love Gone, What's Left? Poem by Sandra Feldman

Love Gone, What's Left?

Rating: 5.0


Pain,
An empty heart,
That does not start,
When Love is gone,
Happiness too,
So hard to find,
A Love all Yours,
And when it's gone,
Closed are all doors.

Sunday, April 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 13 April 2014

Greetings Sandra. The sea is still this evening and I happened upon your poem. I was struck by your line, closed are all doors. Moments ago my translator posted a few lines of my verse, not as poignant or deep with emotion as yours, my words kind of crass actually, but in it the line, that has coldly closed the door. So I thought I should drop you a note.

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