Love Poem by Saint Cynosure

Love

Rating: 5.0


It burns its great,
who would want to escape?
Its like nothing that I know,
that I have felt.
Existing desire,
consuming each breath.
Totally pleasing,
chilling to flesh.
Controlling the mind,
consuming the soul.
An impossible question,
the answer unknown.
Not seen by a vision,
no mirage to be shown.
A dream shared by both,
but a nightmare alone.
It can be a magnet,
that pulls two souls together.
Or a magnet that pushes,
them away to wherever.
It cant be controlled,
but it can be denied.
Although truth exist,
we can view it has lies.
Like a sound that is felt,
with no need to touch.
It is just like a drug,
you cant get enough.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 06 November 2008

Existing desire, consuming each breath. It is just like a drug, you cant get enough. I love those lines, and yes the desire, everyone knows and wants sometimes without knowing they want it. good job. Becca

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Shalini Kts 26 August 2008

' too much of anything is good for nothing' but this seems false in love, poem is nice to read

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