Love... Poem by Megzii Invisable

Love...

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Love is hard..
in so many ways..
you have to have pain
to have the love

i cant explain..
explain what i am feeling
i no its true.
but what can i do

this is all for you..
that boy i dont no
the one i see
and never hear

i wish i knew what to do
i wish i wish i wish
but im 13 what do i know
all i have is my heart and soul

thats got me through the days..
but ive had enough!
Im sick of it all...
i need you.. i want you...
I LOVE YOU

Yes that sounds silly as im only young
but love can form from any age
wether your young or old..
this world works in mystierious ways..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 11 February 2008

Sad, heartfelt and very real, it seems such a shame for such a young soul to take on a most difficult task. Dealing with heart strings is difficult for adults and certainly most complex for the young. There is so much more you should be focusing on. True love does not hurt, true love is beautiful and many cherished memories come from that. One must have experienced life in order to understand the meaning behind that. It is impossible for a 13 year old to understand that and therefore may find themselves in situations they just can't handle. Give yourelf time and enjoy your life as a young person, time goes fast enough as it is. Melvina

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'all I have is my heart and soul', wow! how does that sound! I don't think you need anything more... Perhaps you don't realize that, but you are in posession of something very precious...Keep is save Beautiful poem :) Write on...

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