Love Poem by Carissa McBride

Love

Rating: 5.0


love is beuatiful
yet horrible
it makes you
or breaks you
keeps together or tears you apart.
it's life or death.
and as i look at love long lost
i stand tall
broken and shattered
heart weathered
i pick up the pieces
of a broken heart
a heart shattered by rejection
humilliation
and defeat
i stand tall
tears streaming down my face
and i walk on.
written by bleeding mascara

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Memories And Hope 28 September 2007

We walk on....heartbroken.....thats so true. I think all of us can see in this poem a mirror of our own pasts. Well written!

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Howard Johnson 28 September 2007

A painful ending, From a pleasurable begining, Excellent write Carissa..

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