Love Poem by Crystal Michalski

Love

Rating: 5.0


I'm in this box and It's filled with red stuff.
I'm bleeding my heart out for you. It's not to long before I'm gone and I'll be waiting for you forever.

But why do I love you? I have no idea.Without you in my life I die.
So this is the end. The end for me to live. It's all because, of you.
You made me feel so safe. Then you turned around and went to that hoe. I told you if you feel for her then you would get broken but, you didn't listen and you broke me.

So know I'm dead and your having sex with that hoe, she's just playing with you and she doesn't feel the same way I feel for you.
I'm the one that loves you. So why don't you see.

See the love I have for you. I know you love her but, you know she doesn't love you. So why try, that's what I say to myself.

It's called forget and no pain will come your way. Then why do I hurt, I'm forgetting but, this pain is much worse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

ideas all hopeless.... all through the stanzas.......to move into the unknown....deep to ponder on....the message enclosed all through is soul awakening..nice poem..10++

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Jones Jones 10 June 2009

Ah Crystal; Its good to get your feelings out and onto paper so to speak... You have in this prose, adequately expressed your feelings for this person who has betrayed you and whom you still love even though they have hurt you so badly...

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