Love Poem by Brittany Gorski

Love



The first time I saw you
My heart just flew
I was so nervous to talk
So we took a walk

This feeling was so new
How could i be blue?
My heart was about to knock
through my chest. It used to be on lock.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

A heart- felt love piece. Feelings of first love are always great. Keep on writing, Brittany. Best Wishes. Naseer

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~ Jon London ~ 06 February 2009

A heart written piece Brittany...........keep up the good work....and keep expressing your poetic voice Best wishes Jon

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