Lovable Suicide Poem by Ina Davila

Lovable Suicide

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Falling from the highest point of the day,
Falling for the one I love so I can lay,
Lay in the dirt, where I belong
Laying there, singing one song
Nightmares haunt my dreams
I have no idea what it means
I'm drowning in my tears and blood,
I should get up but I don't know if I really should
Grave diggers move all about the ground
I just lay there without a sound
Waiting, waiting for you to come back and save me
I have no idea what I would be
Being without you tears me apart
I cant breathe from the start
I'm lying in this ditch with no one to talk to
I think I should give up, you have no idea what I've been through
The rain is falling on my face
My body fills with all your disgrace
Hearts and cuts, carved on my arms
You told me that you would do me no harm
Now that I know that is a lie
All I have to tell you is 'Goodbye'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Barnacle 14 November 2008

Brilliant, that is perfect.A wonderful pain expressed.Carry those scars myself. Perfect poem.Thank you.P xx

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