Lost Poem by Aria Ratering

Lost



I miss you, I need you, where are you? I need you.Live.Laugh.Love.Listen. i wait and wait but still no call i wait and wait, i try not to fall.i miss you, i need you, where are you? I am lost without you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

This is a very simple writing. Not complex or creative or inventive. Just the opposite of the previous one. There is not much to recommend it either. The message is so simple as to be essentially useless in this case. It seems that a lot of words are wasted on very little said. Not high marks here. GW62

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Xy-za Dile 23 February 2009

short and simple.. cute.

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