...Losing The Battle Poem by Amy

...Losing The Battle

Rating: 3.0


The battle is over
It took so long
But lasted a mere hour
I gave my best
Put my strengths up
To a test but
I guess my best wasn’t good enough
So I respect the outcome
Sure it would have been nice
To wave my flag in victory
But life isn’t always fair
It’s down to choices
And I guess I left
Deciding my fate
To late, and I regret it
But in a way I didn’t lose
Just received a different
Outcome to what I truly wanted
Sure I’m mad
And I wish it was different
But I lost
And the best girl won

Whoopee

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

you lose your battle in a noble way there, Amy...a write vivaciously expressive...thanks...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Amazing, love it.10+

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

ur poem is a great example of emotion..marvelous write Amy

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Kenn Sun 10 April 2009

Is it mentioning the Love, as battle?

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 April 2009

Life is not fair.........and one must get used to it..........Bill Gates (Microsoft Chairman) ..............Your effort is really commendable..........to lost is not imortant neither to win..........importance is to fight.......you fought that's good............Good Write.........I like it............

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