Lord Of The Flies Poem by Daniel Y.

Lord Of The Flies



All friends leave.
Their reasons unbeknownst to me.
Perhaps they are attracted to the fly zapper.
Doors open for some.
So outside we die in the cold,
jealous of our cousin.
But they inside die alone,
jealous of the cold.

Perhaps they were embarrassed
of the hydra-cowlick on my head
(which calls me absent minded) .
I am coolness teflon.
And so my happiness in spite of loneliness
keeps me one.
Singular.
Perhaps I was the blue bird
they bought to sing of sorrow
but I sang cheerful of the rain.
So my friends buy a new bird
and I am returned to that familiar store
where I sing to all the animals
my friends.

I don’t know what they won’t they won’t tell me.
But perhaps they lack the words
to describe what they lack.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 31 July 2014

The poet is true to his voice and his vocation. That's what the metaphor of the blue bird reveals. Those others wanted something to confirm their dead-end philosophy, a bird singing of death and despair. But your blue-bird voice miffs them singing the truth as it sees it, and even the dark, dank, dull voice of the new bird can't silence it. I don't know if I reached the heart of this poem with my comment - there are passages I can't penetrate - but the lines MY HAPPINESS DESPITE MY LONELINESS KEEPS ME ONE sounds like a condition of integrity.

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