Look In The Mirror Poem by David Harris

Look In The Mirror

Rating: 5.0


I look in the mirror
And what do I see
A reflection of someone else
Staring out at me
I see someone I used to know
Someone who used to be me
As I look in the mirror
That’s what I see

One drink led to another
A drunkard I became
Now my poor family
Are looked on with shame
Empty bottles fill every corner
Money I have none
My wife and children go hungry
As I crawl around the floor

As the days grew longer
The worse I became
Bottle followed bottle
Perfecting my shame
I yelled and I shouted
Strange things did I see
But none were more stranger
Than a reflection of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 07 April 2007

That old bottle takes it toile on all those that just can't put it down. Friends and family suffer also as a result of this horrific addiction. I'm glad you wrote this David, now I must go and read your other piece. Thankyou David--Melvina--

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 February 2007

Sounds like me this, i got to the point where i did not like the person looking back at me very much... ah but a little lady saved me.. Great write David...10

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David, believe me, I know exactly from where you are coming, such that this piece hits home. Brave and well-penned. t x

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2007

Nice write on a serious subject, the demon drink that creeps up slowly on its unsuspecting subject, best wishes Lynda xx

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