Lonely Poem by lizzy smith

Lonely

Rating: 5.0


I see the sorrow
in her eyes
the pain, the hurt
death and lies

she wonders why
she goes through life
looking for love
she knows she won't find

looking up
into the sky
she watches the stars
passing by

she walks alone
into the dark
by herself
and her lonely heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Such Emotion and sadness 20/20 Nicholas Spandrel

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~ Jon London ~ 06 February 2009

so much emotion that it drips down the page, I found myself walking with you on this one....wonderful and raw........just the way I like'm Keep expressing.......10+ Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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Sue Sie 06 February 2009

A sad little verse..Loneliness doent have to be...thanks for your thoughts

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