Lonely Poem by Sandra Feldman

Lonely

Rating: 4.8


I'm tired of being lonely,
Of not having a face,
Of just drifting along,
In this world of disgrace.

I'm tired of being lonely,
Of not seeing your face,
Of walking alone,
At a much slower pace.

I'm tired of being lonely,
In a World, I don't know,
A grain of sand in the ocean,
A footprint in the snow.

Friday, April 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 04 April 2015

“A footprint in the snow...” Such a lovely metaphor! It goes to show Your poetry shall live Ever more.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 April 2015

Oh, what a lovely poem this is! The first stanza touched me deep. Reading the second one, I paused and looked at my pace. The third sends me to sleep, wondering... Truly, a poem that touches!

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2015

Not a unfamiliar thought. I actually sense my isolation to a greater degree when I am among people in public.

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