Loneliness Poem by Philip Vincent Sanders

Loneliness



Loneliness is a ticking clock
Inside an empty room
That echoes round inside your head
And you feel just like a tomb
Its a cacophony of silence
As you stare across the street
And desperately want to hear
The sounds of passing feet
To watch and see the happiness
Of others passing by
Whilst you are sitting quietly
Watching clouds go by
You know the room so intimately
Everything in its place
At times you feel its choking you
And smothering your face
Deep down there.. inside of you
There's just an empty space...
of broken dreams and memories...
why can't they take place?
And so you drift off to your bed
To try and get some sleep
Days and nights can seem like years
Tomorrow...... maybe peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Aluning 09 December 2005

Very nice poem. It described the negativism of life on the first sentences and ended up to a brighter view. To some extent, only when u feel alone, that's the time to recollect and reminisce things back... or plan ahead. Silence seems defeaning, only then we can think of what's life has better more in store for us or what more harm it will do on us, depending on how we treat each and every situation that come and go...leaving the memories of sadness and welcoming days ahead with a glee. That's why our eyes are placed in front for us to look ahead than backward. Keep writing, u do it so well.

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