Loneliness Poem by Sun shine

Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


In the loneliness of night
i feel the appearance of someone;
who is with me..
with the twinkling stars present on the sky; ;
ensure me not to weep;
and preserve me in the company of innocence, ,
and appeal me....
not to commemorate; ; ;
THE PAST DAYS! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 31 August 2012

Speechless! It's very emotional.. I can relate to it :) 10+

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Eindaray Kyaw 31 August 2012

You can compose will enough about lonliness!

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 December 2013

Beautiful write. Past is over never to come back. But loneliness is telling you something. Loved it.

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Yasmin Khan 12 July 2013

Some visions are always there when we are lonely, a good write.

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

for a poet loneliness is the gift.past is never to come back. look at the sky stars are smiling commenting on you. listen what they r saying.

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The power of your poetry is a marvel to me here! This kind of writing is rare and I appreciate you for it. The past has to be now reversed into a super future that can make you a happy bard. Dear Sun Shine, Thanks a lot for reading my PLAYING A HOST FOR YOU. You would have made the evening brighter with your shine and I am sorry for not having mentioned your name there. Probably you might have come and sat somewhere away from my sight then... I will surely call you for the next get together after the DOOM`S DAY and when your future too begins to be much more redeemable.

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 September 2012

Beautifully expressed.. Touching! ! !

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