Locked Door Poem by Tork Souad Diana

Locked Door

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I passed by a door
I've never seen before.
I knocked to implore
But no answer, therefore,
I kissed it twice,
It trembled in fright.
I cried once,
It opened in sight.
I remained shocked
No whisper, just crawl
As the door unlocked
And I reached a big wall.
And from a distance
I heard a whisper
That was full of wisdom
Netherless persistence:
'Your journey starts here
The road you take
Don't dropp a tear
As you make a mistake.
Look beyond the sea,
Fly above the sky,
Till you can see
Your time to defy.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 February 2009

A very wise poem..... You have explored the wisdom behind the locked door. Keep up the good work, Tork. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Vinod Kumar 03 February 2009

A very good delivery, nice stanzas, simple with great meaning.10++

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