Living With A Crack Poem by TARA.. Star

Living With A Crack

Rating: 5.0


Eh! living with a crack is so hard,
How to mend a broken heart? ?

Don’t blame me! if I wrong..
Its just, Im suffering since long

Help me in finding a lost key,
Help me to forget & letting me free..

I'm confused & all this making me mad
I wish this crack, I didn’t had…


T@R@
Will shine always

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose MaryB. 20 May 2009

Cracks hurt! But at least its only a crack and its not fallen into pices. Cracks take shorter time to heal than putting pice by pice back together. good poem :)

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

the comment by ata my friend is so apt and true.....dont get rid of this crack..thats the essence of poetic stuff...we wont want to lose a member; -) but your lines are great...touching light and balanced liked it

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Sarah Abdullah 13 April 2009

Now this one is GREAT..... Love the Image os the Crack and the Lost Key... Good write..

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ata khan 12 April 2009

Having a crack is very bad, hurtful. But then again, it makes us good poets at times: -) Good one Laila

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James Mclain 06 April 2009

You can but suffer the light it is always going to shine.. the broken heart never mends pour replacement's are my lip's...iip..much to great art thou..

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