I Need A Chance.... Poem by TARA.. Star

It is very enchanting this grasp of yours to reach the edge night sky so high sweet is song when sung at night stars sigh..iip

Don't we all need chances? It's great and puts it in a way that makes sense.

gud one.. we all need a chance.. and wen we get a chance we shdnt leave tht chance.. howeva.. life is to explore.. search new hopes! so letz make d life wid all our chance.. lovely peom.. really touchd ma heart..! ! but there is a mistake in 3rd line.. wud u pls correct it.. tc! !

That is nice and theirs always chances in life just have to learn which one is the right one good work i like it

Thats truth my freind. We all need a chance to revial the potential we got inside.. Their is no revolution anymore: so this poem could have a mass effect.

wow it's a really nice poem..well done :)

this real good

I really like your poem.....its exprssional: p

wings of fire and wish to cherish and she wish to live like a bird..in this sky to... I wish to live in the stars, Might please me living so far. My presence would brightup them,

nice poem if wishes were horses then all could ride