Living Poem by alicia cross

Living

Rating: 4.3


Living in the moment,
Suffering from the memories;
Preaching to the wounded,
Hiding your past for security;
But why so much pain,
Why so many scars,
We live our life emotionless,
When it only hurts ourselves;
Pride is left behind,
Leaving nothing left to stand for;
Forgiving criminals in your own life,
Because they too have many battles
behind that door;
With or without consciousness,
We stride for help;
Just praying the end is not what
we are living for.


By: Alicia N. Cross 2-26-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

'hiding your past for security' and 'just praying the end is not what we are living for' lines like that are what makes you a great writter. keep up the excellent work

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