Limerick- Sad Predicament Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Sad Predicament

Rating: 4.8


The zealous poet lay awake all night
When fancy tickled, he sat up to write
Scripted verse after verse
On topics diverse
But sad, none of his poems found light!

Limerick- Sad Predicament
Tuesday, June 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 29 June 2017

Where did you get that picture of me? Trying to write some crappy poetry Nothing I write will rhyme Forget about sublime In poetry I'm a catastrophe Thanks for the fun Valsa.

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Valsa George 29 June 2017

Ha.... ha! Who said you write crappy poetry? Oh.... never! ! Thank you for your poetic response...Loke! In poetry, you're never a misfit You make us happy with your ready wit You are quick to retort Which is your great forte Through your verse, great cheer you transmit!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

Struggle of a poet is far captured in vision to express in way of fun in this beautiful Limerick. This happens sometimes a poet becomes zealous and thinks more to sit and write poems whole night. This is sad definitely if his poems do not get light and readers do not accept these. A cleverly penned poem is shared through expression of humor....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

It is true that a poet or poetess writes poems when fancy tickles.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

It is true that a poet or poetess writes poems when fancy tickles, this happens to the poet here. He efforts whole night to write though none of his poems found light! . Very beautiful limerick on struggle. Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 20 April 2018

I had to come back to this one, brings me hope knowing that I am not alone. Thanks Valsa.

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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

plight of most poets -their work never sees light! Nice limerick!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 August 2017

A very true satire on poets who write so many poemslike me but fail to write a good poem

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

Lovely poem with so many gifted poets vying for the spot light enjoyed by 'The zealous poet'. Of late, I have also been doing that. I am glad that I get a sound sleep after this arduous exercise. Thanks for sharing the poem, Valsa ji.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Great humour, Valsa! I can relate to this. You could be talking about me....as what you describe is almost always the first day of any attempt of mine to write anything. Great work, Valsa.

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