Like Your Sky Poem by Rohit Sharma

Like Your Sky

Rating: 5.0


Wherever you go, wherever you are
You'll find me there, no matter how far
It doesn't matter how distant you fly
I'll always be with you, Just like your sky....

If ever you feel, hot sun rays around
I'll become a cloud to sooth your surround
If ever you feel alone, lonely and solitaire
I'll become your shadow to always be there....

If ever clouds of sadness surrounds
Let them rain on me with all their bounds
If something bothers or you're upset or hurt
Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first....

Ever since you've come in my life
You've spread around a trap of smiles
Now I've understood the true way of living
By getting lost in you, I've found my everything....

Wherever you go, I'll come with you
Will walk with you till the life is through
Wherever you are, no matter how far you fly
I'll always be with you, just like your sky! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 11 June 2010

So very beautiful. If something bothers or you're upset or hurt Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first.... This is pure selflessness in love. It reminded me of one old Hindi song: Tu jahaan jahaan chalega Mera saaya saatth hogaa... The title number from 'Mera Saaya' sung by Lata Mangeshkar.

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Gjetaj Jenny 30 July 2010

Absolutly wonderful good job i really love it

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Unwritten Soul 25 July 2010

Like your sky? ...hahahah..u know why i'm laughing? because we all sharing same sky... Yeah i know what u mean but i'm just joking! ..I love to smile when u say that u better be hurt first before the it hurt ur lover...if your lover say same thing, then poor to pain because it become confuse which one it should hurt first, again i just kidding...but the true comment is...Wonderful and Lovely...i give u 10...enough? if not i'll give more because u are my friend lol

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Anita Trivedi 29 June 2010

You have soo much of love to express........ Again a heart taking poem

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An all encompassing love poem, like the sky. Also saw a sacrificial love within the write. Well Done: D

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Gita Ashok 11 June 2010

So very beautiful. If something bothers or you're upset or hurt Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first.... This is pure selflessness in love. It reminded me of one old Hindi song: Tu jahaan jahaan chalega Mera saaya saatth hogaa... The title number from 'Mera Saaya' sung by Lata Mangeshkar.

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Rohit Sharma

Rohit Sharma

Amritsar, India
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